Eli

We are learning to write an argument that will persuade the reader to agree with our point of view. We need to include:
• An introduction which states the problem and tells our opinion,
• Reasons for our opinion,
• An ending which restates our opinion.
The first one we have written is about what needs to happen so we get a fair turn using the computer at home.
Eight year olds have trouble getting to use the computer at home. In my opinion computers should be cheaper so kids can get their own computers. They should do this so kids can work on the computer whenever they want to. They should also make computers where you write on the screen so kids don’t have to learn typing on the keyboard. If that doesn’t work they can let the younger one go first because the older kid hogs up all the time.
That is what I think should be done about computers.